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Darfur: To the Victor Go the Spoils [|WWW.Change.org] Date: Novmber 17,2009 A guy over in Darfur named Khartoun is targeting disfavored ethnic groups. He is making all ethnic group's lives terrible. He is forcing them into camps. He is also taking their homes and land away from them. The ethnic group's names are Fur, Massaleit, Zaghawa. This is not the first time Darfur has been politically manipulated.

My reaction on this article is that I can't believe that poeple are doing this. It is mean and not fair to the other poeple that are losing their homes and land for no reason. I dont like what is happening to these poeple. If they didn't do anything wrong than they should not be punished like they are just because someone doesn't like them for who they are. The poeple that are doing this to other groups must be cold hearted and filled with hate. It might be because of theiur childhood lives. They should not make everyone else feel bad just because there life is or was bad. I just wish that no one would do things like this becuase it is not right. That is my reaction on this artticle.

COMMENT: first of all great article read it before already but your explained it well. and u meant politically manipulated.

Comment: The article seems like it was very interesting and I beleive you got all the points across. Still, it lacks a lot of flow and is very choppy. There were also many grammar, spelling, and capitalization error so try to pay more attention to your writing and always review. Kassandra W. **